Gustave Deresse
Jun 21, 2024

Thank you, Jay. 😎 I guess "too" follows the subtitle, "You're eyes are well appreciated, though that's not all - your hearts and minds are worthy too." I do this a lot, treat the headline like sentence 1, subtitle as sentence 2, and go from there. And "worthy" just felt right. It's communicating my gratitude for my reader's attention, and not just their scroll time. βœ¨πŸ™

Gustave Deresse
Gustave Deresse

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